I hope you like the final version even more than the first. I believe the design is now fluid and holds much better.
Tuesday, February 24, 2009
Christopher Columbus Fails Again
With recent critiques and suggestions to the history-changing shirt I have recently designed, I have mocked up a final draft. This includes a compilation of the shirt and design in one image, which is how many designs are presented, so I decided to make one.
I hope you like the final version even more than the first. I believe the design is now fluid and holds much better.
I hope you like the final version even more than the first. I believe the design is now fluid and holds much better.
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Pink?!
ReplyDeleteNot quite. It's supposed to be a cream color. Haha!
ReplyDeleteYou know how the CMYK transfer goes, hence your Valentines Day Flower Illustration. ;)
I've got to be honest, I don't know what you changed, but it looks good. The only thing that I would suggest is to maybe make the word Santa Maria flow with the sail; it looks a little stiff, but that may be what you are looking for.
ReplyDeleteThanks Samantha!
ReplyDeleteI changed some line work and filled in the bottom of the ship to keep the continuity of the design. Glad you like it!
I agree with Zeb; looks pink to me. One thing that bothers me is the direction of the flags. It apears that the wind is blowing upwards from the water which seems a bit odd.
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